Thursday, September 26, 2013

Copy so far.






Videos:

Sound: baby crying.

That’s my mate, Jack.
Stuck in mud with his leg shot off.
He’s been out there for just over 9 hours.
No Man’s Land.

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Sound: increasing heart beat.

Four walls.
That’s all it takes to bring back the trench.
That’s where they died.
You were dead meat if you stayed still for long.

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Sound: evacuation alarm.

Thank Christ!
I’ll be seeing Lucy’s pretty face again.
But her brother, Jack, won’t get to.
He had to stay there, while I got to leave.


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Last week's mock ups:


Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Normandy Beach sand silhouettes

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2429903/Peace-Day-Reminder-millions-lives-lost-war-artists-stencil-9-000-bodies-Normandy-beach.html

Sunday, September 22, 2013

Film Fest Taste what you see

http://designtaxi.com/news/360780/The-NYC-Food-Film-Festival-Lets-You-Taste-What-You-See-On-The-Screen/

Friday, September 13, 2013

Sound Tests 2

Sound: evacuation alarm in dark cinema.
We took comfort in the noise. It meant that we weren’t deaf—yet. Or dead—yet. Silence, well… That meant there was a shell above you. Our bodies would scream to get the hell out of there, but fear paralysed you. And soon, silence was all that followed.
Maybe evacuation alarm should be to contrast our reactions to it and theirs.
Us: Oh shit! Let's get out of here.
Them: Yeah fantastic! We're getting out of here.


The copy above suggests that even the noise was dreadful (find bad noise, noisy)—they were glad to hear it as it meant they were still alive.
Maybe this:




List of top 10 annoying sounds:
http://www.mnn.com/health/fitness-well-being/stories/the-top-10-most-annoying-sounds.

The worst sounds in the world
1. Knife on a bottle
2. Fork on a glass
3. Chalk on a blackboard
4. Ruler on a bottle
5. Nails on a blackboard
6. Female scream
7. Anglegrinder
8. Brakes on a cycle squealing
9. Baby crying
10. Electric drill

Week 7 Copy


CAFÉ:

Coffee Break.
On takeaway coffee cups and coffee saucers.

I would’ve sold my soul for this.
Exhaustion ground us down.
Rest was rare. We were lucky to get the length of your coffee break.
But boy, we cherished whatever we got.
It was something we looked forward to, and a chance to keep ours souls a little longer.

Between dates and statistics were the daily lives of men at war.
They left ordinary boys and returned experienced men.
Experience the in-between at the Anzacs exhibition.
Crafted by Weta Workshop, and alive at Te Papa.

Smells like Home.
On café plates.          

The smell of your breakfast ensured my return.
Who knew the war would go on for so long. Four years! Four years without even a whiff of my sizzling love.
Thinking of bacon led me straight home. Sunday breakkies on our porch was a weekly tradition.
And I was determined to come home to keep it going.

A Soldier’s Washcloth.

Your tea smells like a cleaned soldier.
Water was too precious to waste on things like washing.
So we’d just take the teabags and smear them over ourselves and declare ourselves clean.
Feel free to do the same. Consider it a practical history lesson.

Between dates and statistics were the daily lives of men at war.
They left ordinary boys and returned experienced men.
Experience the in-between at the Anzacs exhibition.
Crafted by Weta Workshop, and alive at Te Papa.
CINEMA:
Baby soldiers.
Sound: baby crying in dark cinema.

That’s my mate, Jack.
Stuck in mud with two broken legs, a shrapnel-filled arm, and a hole where his ear should’ve been.
They said there are 500 bodies to an acre over there—either dead or dying.
No Man’s Land. Capable of making even the toughest soldier wail.
I couldn’t do a thing but listen to him, knowing that it was only a matter of time until he fell silent.

Fear of silence.
Sound: siren in dark cinema.

We took comfort in the noise.
It meant that we weren’t deaf—yet. Or dead—yet.
Silence, well… That meant there was a shell above you.
Our bodies would scream to get the hell out of there, but fear paralysed you.
And soon, silence was all that followed.

Best Mates.

Bill and I met with our pants down.
Here we were side by side, two grown men perched over a muddy ditch unloading out bowels. Not exactly something we did back home. Might as well make mates. Might make things less awkward.
Turns out, Bill saved my life on the field. Our friendship saw us through the war.
And sixty years later, we’re still best mates.
But we have separate toilets now.

Between dates and statistics were the daily lives of men at war.
They left ordinary boys and returned experienced men.
Experience the in-between at the Anzacs exhibition.
Crafted by Weta Workshop, and alive at Te Papa.
Was the sex worth it?
You’d still be riding the postcoital high when disinfectant was forced up your urethra.
Many caught venereal diseases. About one in five was the surface figure; but I bet there were more hidden in closets. I saw some boys commit suicide after hearing they had syphilis. It was pretty much a death sentence.

Between dates and statistics were the daily lives of men at war.
They left ordinary boys and returned experienced men.
Experience the in-between at the Anzacs exhibition.
Crafted by Weta Workshop, and alive at Te Papa.

Wednesday, September 11, 2013

The War Museum: Battle of Somme

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/radio/the_war_museum_battle_of_somme